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What do you think of this? Some of you might not know this but every now and then I try to do some music. You know, record it on my computer, writing some lyrics...
I don't really know why, but I'd like to know what you think of these lyrics I just wrote. It's about trying to get past a broken relationship. Here we go: You said I changed You didn't know me anymore It was you who changed me but still I am to blame I will not pretend to live now that you're gone I would have pretended to be him if only you had stayed So I guess I will have to burn all bridges and run from the ashes and run from you Sometimes we live forever Sometimes we die all the time With you life seemed ever so long oh how the mighty fall Now and then I get quite used to it Then again the thought of you is unbearable ease my mind let me hold another hand So I guess I will have to burn all bridges and run from the ashes and run from you So if you'd like to comment in any way, please feel free to do so! You can tell me it's shit and I suck, I can take it. | |
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calldapplwondery83 said: Some of you might not know this but every now and then I try to do some music. You know, record it on my computer, writing some lyrics...
I don't really know why, but I'd like to know what you think of these lyrics I just wrote. It's about trying to get past a broken relationship. Here we go: You said I changed You didn't know me anymore It was you who changed me but still I am to blame I will not pretend to live now that you're gone I would have pretended to be him if only you had stayed So I guess I will have to burn all bridges and run from the ashes and run from you Sometimes we live forever Sometimes we die all the time With you life seemed ever so long oh how the mighty fall Now and then I get quite used to it Then again the thought of you is unbearable ease my mind let me hold another hand So I guess I will have to burn all bridges and run from the ashes and run from you So if you'd like to comment in any way, please feel free to do so! You can tell me it's shit and I suck, I can take it. Honestly, I love it. I think it's great, especially the burning of the bridge and running from the ashes. I love that. Running from something you definately cannot return to. Of course you didn't have to hear that from me, I can't write a lyric worth anything. If I do it sounds sooooo sappy. Good work. Miguel [Edited 1/25/05 12:04pm] MyeternalgrattitudetoPhil&Val.Herman said "We want sweaty truckers at the truck stop! We want cigar puffing men that look like they wanna beat the living daylights out of us" Val"sporking is spooning with benefits" | |
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Very Lisa Loeb!
[Edited 1/25/05 12:04pm] | |
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Thanks!
...who's Lisa Loeb? | |
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i really like it and so much i could post in lyrics to suit your mood | |
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very nice | |
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