Some of you might not know this but every now and then I try to do some music. You know, record it on my computer, writing some lyrics...
I don't really know why, but I'd like to know what you think of these lyrics I just wrote. It's about trying to get past a broken relationship.
Here we go:


You said I changed
You didn't know me anymore
It was you who changed me
but still I am to blame

I will not pretend to live
now that you're gone
I would have pretended to be him
if only you had stayed

So I guess I will have to burn all bridges
and run from the ashes
and run from you

Sometimes we live forever
Sometimes we die all the time
With you life seemed ever so long
oh how the mighty fall

Now and then I get quite used to it
Then again the thought of you is unbearable
ease my mind
let me hold another hand

So I guess I will have to burn all bridges
and run from the ashes
and run from you




So if you'd like to comment in any way, please feel free to do so!
You can tell me it's shit and I suck, I can take it.

calldapplwondery83 said:

Honestly, I love it. I think it's great, especially the burning of the bridge and running from the ashes. I love that. Running from something you definately cannot return to. Of course you didn't have to hear that from me, I can't write a lyric worth anything. If I do it sounds sooooo sappy.

Good work.

Miguel

[Edited 1/25/05 12:04pm]

Very Lisa Loeb!


[Edited 1/25/05 12:04pm]

Thanks!


...who's Lisa Loeb?

i really like it and so much i could post in lyrics to suit your mood

very nice