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Thread started 12/02/04 7:14pm

AsianBomb777

My Poem - Miami in the Morning

Miami in The Morning - Contemplations on being abandoned (By AsianBomb777)

Oh burning sun of jealous fury,
Slow to waken from evening’s excess,
Still tasting the bile of indulgence,
Residue of two lover’s sundered Nexus,

Unwavering and cheerful, Ocean drive wakens,
Feeling stripped by piercing eyes, nakedly insecure,
I look down at the menu, order nothing
And avoid the hazy memory of my paramour,

Still not strong enough to accept your gift,
Sometime between the rise of mars and Venus,
Bereft of solace in the hum of walking tourists,
Surrounded in Miami’s warmth like your mouth around my penis,

I sit in the News Café, sit and sit and sit,
Still hearing the drone of the DJ,
Still wondering how it went horribly astray,
Still longing for your BJ,

We could make anew,
Mend this widening void between us,
And you could keep me warm and safe again,
Surround me with your love, like your lips around my penis,

Like your lips around my penis,
Like your lips around my penis,

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[Edited 12/2/04 19:19pm]
[Edited 12/4/04 14:02pm]
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Reply #1 posted 12/02/04 7:16pm

Fleshofmyflesh

Hey AB.....one friend to another.....you should maybe kinda go outside sometimes.....meet people.....you know?
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Reply #2 posted 12/02/04 7:16pm

Natisse

clapping wow...
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Reply #3 posted 12/02/04 7:29pm

Fleshofmyflesh

Okay, AB....I'm trying to get to a deeper level on this with ya.
It sounds to me like you just had a one night stand but the person you really love, you can't have???
Keep in mind, it's 10:28 PM and I am blonde.
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Reply #4 posted 12/02/04 7:31pm

AsianBomb777

Fleshofmyflesh said:

Okay, AB....I'm trying to get to a deeper level on this with ya.
It sounds to me like you just had a one night stand but the person you really love, you can't have???
Keep in mind, it's 10:28 PM and I am blonde.



Yes, yes... Go on. That's good.

Did you get the lines about the socio-economic issues involving resource allocation, and fellatio?
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Reply #5 posted 12/02/04 7:33pm

Fleshofmyflesh

AsianBomb777 said:

Fleshofmyflesh said:

Okay, AB....I'm trying to get to a deeper level on this with ya.
It sounds to me like you just had a one night stand but the person you really love, you can't have???
Keep in mind, it's 10:28 PM and I am blonde.



Yes, yes... Go on. That's good.

Did you get the lines about the socio-economic issues involving resource allocation, and fellatio?



Right!
And that's why you couldn't afford to order anything, right? lol
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Reply #6 posted 12/02/04 7:54pm

AsianBomb777

Fleshofmyflesh said:

AsianBomb777 said:




Yes, yes... Go on. That's good.

Did you get the lines about the socio-economic issues involving resource allocation, and fellatio?



Right!
And that's why you couldn't afford to order anything, right? lol



Damn. U're good.

I think you, me, and DarkNight and Return of Dook are the only ones contributing to these tacky posts lately.
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Reply #7 posted 12/02/04 7:56pm

Fleshofmyflesh

AsianBomb777 said:

Fleshofmyflesh said:




Right!
And that's why you couldn't afford to order anything, right? lol



Damn. U're good.

I think you, me, and DarkNight and Return of Dook are the only ones contributing to these tacky posts lately.



And Anxiety.
I feel part of a group and yet.....so all alone.
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Reply #8 posted 12/02/04 8:55pm

AsianBomb777

Fleshofmyflesh said:

AsianBomb777 said:




Damn. U're good.

I think you, me, and DarkNight and Return of Dook are the only ones contributing to these tacky posts lately.



And Anxiety.
I feel part of a group and yet.....so all alone.



alone?
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Reply #9 posted 12/02/04 10:03pm

madartista

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Does Dook know you're writing poems to him?

Oh, and good work!!!
let me come over it's a beautiful day to play with you in the dark
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Reply #10 posted 12/02/04 10:18pm

Dewrede

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What about those vagina's you always mention
I am somewhat disappointed they're not mentioned here
biggrin
However , it's still amusing
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Reply #11 posted 12/03/04 4:02pm

AsianBomb777

Dewrede said:

What about those vagina's you always mention
I am somewhat disappointed they're not mentioned here
biggrin
However , it's still amusing
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eek eek How'd you know about the vaginas in my life?
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