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Faltering Daylight Just before all I can see
Are the stars above us I see my smile mirror'd In your eyes You hear my doubt And kiss it away In this faltering daylight All I need is the knowledge Of you being there in the dark. | |
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gooeythehamster said: Just before all I can see
Are the stars above us I see my smile mirror'd In your eyes You hear my doubt And kiss it away In this faltering daylight All I need is the knowledge Of you being there in the dark. | |
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Chico1 said: PURRRRR Poetry is wasted on most here, what was I thinking anyways? | |
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It's beautiful gooey | |
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Thank you, both. | |
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gooeythehamster said: Thank you, both.
you're welcome. more please! | |
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gooeythehamster said: Just before all I can see
Are the stars above us I see my smile mirror'd In your eyes You hear my doubt And kiss it away In this faltering daylight All I need is the knowledge Of you being there in the dark. That actually made me put down my ice cream. Beautiful. | |
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subhuman09 said: gooeythehamster said: Just before all I can see
Are the stars above us I see my smile mirror'd In your eyes You hear my doubt And kiss it away In this faltering daylight All I need is the knowledge Of you being there in the dark. That actually made me put down my ice cream. Beautiful. YOU SHOULD NEVER PUT DOWN YOUR ICECREAM! Midgets might steal it... | |
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beautiful poem, Mr. Goo
makes me long for somoen to tell it to http://elmadartista.tumblr.com/ http://twitter.com/madartista | |
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BEAUTIFUL
Guess what? Karen has a guest room soon! | |
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Muse2NOPharaoh said: BEAUTIFUL
Guess what? Karen has a guest room soon! NEEDS a guest room soon? I hope yer not allergic to cats! | |
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that's very pretty, sir.
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TheFrog said: that's very pretty, sir.
Well, thank you, sir. My pleasure. It was written in my pink romantic period. | |
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