Faltering Daylight

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gooeythehamste r	Faltering Daylight Just before all I can see Are the stars above us I see my smile mirror'd In your eyes You hear my doubt And kiss it away In this faltering daylight All I need is the knowledge Of you being there in the dark.
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Reply #1 posted 09/01/04 12:04am

Chico1	gooeythehamster said: Just before all I can see Are the stars above us I see my smile mirror'd In your eyes You hear my doubt And kiss it away In this faltering daylight All I need is the knowledge Of you being there in the dark.
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Reply #2 posted 09/02/04 12:14am

gooeythehamste r	Chico1 said: PURRRRR Poetry is wasted on most here, what was I thinking anyways?
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Reply #3 posted 09/02/04 12:35am

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It's beautiful gooey rose

Reply #4 posted 09/02/04 12:48am

gooeythehamste r	Thank you, both.
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Reply #5 posted 09/02/04 2:50am

Chico1	gooeythehamster said: Thank you, both. you're welcome. more please!
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Reply #6 posted 09/02/04 3:08am

subhuman09	gooeythehamster said: Just before all I can see Are the stars above us I see my smile mirror'd In your eyes You hear my doubt And kiss it away In this faltering daylight All I need is the knowledge Of you being there in the dark. That actually made me put down my ice cream. Beautiful.
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Reply #7 posted 09/03/04 3:13pm

gooeythehamste r	subhuman09 said: gooeythehamster said: Just before all I can see Are the stars above us I see my smile mirror'd In your eyes You hear my doubt And kiss it away In this faltering daylight All I need is the knowledge Of you being there in the dark. That actually made me put down my ice cream. Beautiful. YOU SHOULD NEVER PUT DOWN YOUR ICECREAM! Midgets might steal it...
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Reply #8 posted 09/03/04 4:36pm

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beautiful poem, Mr. Goo

makes me long for somoen to tell it to

let me come over it's a beautiful day to play with you in the dark
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Reply #9 posted 09/03/04 4:49pm

Muse2NOPharaoh	BEAUTIFUL Guess what? Karen has a guest room soon!
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Reply #10 posted 09/04/04 12:41am

gooeythehamste r	Muse2NOPharaoh said: BEAUTIFUL Guess what? Karen has a guest room soon! NEEDS a guest room soon? I hope yer not allergic to cats!
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Reply #11 posted 09/04/04 12:42am

TheFrog	that's very pretty, sir.
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Reply #12 posted 09/04/04 12:52am

gooeythehamste r	TheFrog said: that's very pretty, sir. Well, thank you, sir. My pleasure. It was written in my pink romantic period.
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