Ok i have just finished a few songs i have been writing over the last month, 2 i really like but 1 im not 2 sure about!!!

This was the first 1 i finished, im not 2 keen on the chorus!

Hear my cry



Hear my cry
Let me know that U r near
Darkness falls
These ghosts still haunt me
Hold me close
Keep me safe from all this fear

I know I shouldn’t have let go
But now I’m here on my own
On my own

Im down and out
And I don’t wanna stay like this
Im lost n not found
I want u 2 rescue me
Just rescue me


Hear me scream
Take notice of me
Darkness falls
These walls are closing in once more
Now I’m alone
Who’s here 2 guide me ( guide me, guide me )

I know I shouldn’t have let go
But now I’m here on my own
On my own

Im down and out
And I don’t wanna stay like this
Im lost n not found
I want u 2 rescue me
Just rescue me




Keeno ©

andykeen said:

do you have more?

2nd 1, this song i wrote is 4 my nan!

I was never there when U left us
I never even said goodbye
These tears are flowing 4 U
As I look up into the night’s sky

I’ll always look back on the times we had
I’ll always see Ur face
Y did he have 2 come knocking on your door
It wasn’t your time 2 leave

I know in heaven Ur be
Looking down on us, feeling our pain
Life was 2 short, but now We’re living 4 U
I know in heaven Ur be
Where Ur heart and soul has been set free!

I take down Ur picture
In heaven I no is best
The love we lost will always remain


Keeno ©

3rd this 1 im not 2 keen on it, im not even sure it makes sense lol!


Those same tears



Staring into the mirror
As the same record still plays
Thinking its time 2 change
These Tears stop this reflection
Covering what once was there
Only those old memories that I see
Instead of what’s meant 2 be

I lye awake at nite
That tune running through my head
So old but still sounds so fresh
Ur face appears in the shadows
I call U near
U turn Ur back and walk away
It’s been agene since u left me
I just want u close
I still smell U here, where u used 2 be
It’s been agene since U’ve gone
I’m sorry if I pushed u away
Ur all I ever dream about
U made me make through the day!

I step out side 4 the first time
The record stops
Silence is all I hear
But your face is on every block!
Those same tears come back
But no record plays
The feeling of freedom is inside
Now I can live again

It’s been agene since u left me
I just want u close
I still smell U here, where u used 2 be
It’s been agene since U’ve gone
I’m sorry if I pushed u away
Ur all I ever dream about
U made me make through the day!

Keeno ©
[This message was edited Thu Aug 5 16:49:46 2004 by andykeen]

andykeen said:

I'm liking this one lad.

I really like them but I would advise to stop pretending your Prince and find your own voice.

omg.

lovemachine said:

How do u mean? writing like him?

lovemachine said:

suck that.

andykeen said:

Yeah, I mean the 4 and the U and UR...that's Prince's thing.

andykeen said:

that was so heartfelt

lovemachine said:

sorry but i find it easier 2 type that way, i'm not trying 2 be him, its just i have always kinda typed like on a comp before i found prince!

Natisse said:

does it even make sense lol

andykeen said:

it does to me
[This message was edited Thu Aug 5 16:59:08 2004 by Natisse]

Andy! Great stuff!

Last 1 peps


With You


I've held your hand so many times
But I still get the feeling I felt the very first time
I've kissed your lips and laid with you
And I cherish every moment we spend in each other's arms
I guess my eyes can only see as far as you
I only want to be with you

We've come so far in so little time
Sometimes I wonder if this is meant to be
Sometimes you are so very kind
That the nights you're not with me I'm scared that you're gonna leave

I guess you could say that I'm just being a fool
But I only want to be with you

I guess you could say that I'm just being a fool
But I always, always want to be with you


Never with out you




Keeno©04

andykeen said: