Wasnt going to post it but panthagirl changed my mind.hope you dig it.....


" undone "
by:crazyhorse

my soul is gone and i'm still here
what's going on
illusions are my life
smoke and mirrors so you can't see
god...i think you made a big mistake

why does it have to be this way
with all we've done i
never thought you'd let me come undone

you are so unsure but cant let go
sweetness your heart
keeps you stuck in one place
eyes they look at me
don't worry baby i promised and i will

why does it have to be this way
with all we've done i
never thought you'd let me come undone

i'm unwinding slow
fields weeds around me grow
when if you please,help me see
blame in you i place
make me then ignore it when i break

why does it have to be this way
all we've been done i
never thought you'd let me come undone

did you know that i called
i'm just here waitng, baby come save me

WHY...i dont want to lose her again
LOVE...i'll live forever, just dont take from me
GOD...its just been a long time since you put your love down on me...

This thread is sexist!

reported!

althom said:

just listen to your filthy stinkin' mouth - what about the children? BANNED!!!!

Anxiety said:

as always...that way with words

Natisse said:

Thanks Nat!

But all I did was report him.

Real good

very good

Very nice...

I told you this earlier, but, I really like this part:

i'm unwinding slow
fields weeds around me grow
when if you please,help me see
blame in you i place
make me then ignore it when i break

Again, just beautiful

Girl!!!!! Do you not remember that he was on my Man Whore list for a reason?

MsSmartypants said:

I do...and it still doesn't take away the fact that it's a beautiful poem.

MsSmartypants said:

I think he was only number 7 on your list....he should be bumped up because of this thread...I was 2!!

Thanxxx ladies... MsSmartypants ya old heffa go keep ya self busy

throws panties at crazy ..... errr wait my bra

kdowney said:

Sinister said:

LOL down boy!!!

Sinister said:

what U don't want em so ha

kdowney said:

Damn...well thanx. G-strings at that. Just ran outta floss to.

crazyhorse said:

Swoon!

May I have a poem too Crazyhore. I will put on a skirt if that helps.

Why can't I think of doing these things?

althom said:

Come on Althom. Let's go down the pub...

JDINTERACTIVE said:

Yeah! Maybe we can find some drunk girls there!!

JDINTERACTIVE said:

think jd's gonna give it to ya athlom

althom said:

Fuckin Men

MostBeautifulGrlNTheWorld said:

HEY!!!

It's the only chance I have with women.