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Thread started 01/12/17 9:22pm

FlyOnTheWall

Fan Fiction ~ TIME || Prince & Andy Allo

Well, now!!! Look what I just stumbled up on (not upon!!!)!!! stirthepot I've just begun to read, but, so far, it's pretty darn addictive. popcorn I hope it doesn't make too many heads explode. fuse giggle

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Reply #1 posted 01/13/17 4:15am

FlyOnTheWall

So far, I think the story is pretty cute, albeit a bit grammatically challenged. One thing I don't like is that the author makes it seem that Andy is not really a songwriter and Prince just writes the songs and gives them to her. I think that feeds into the notion that Prince actually wrote her album. According to Andy, she also co-wrote "Time" and "What It Feels Like." Folks forget that Andy already had an independent album before she met Prince.

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Reply #2 posted 01/15/17 9:54am

joytotheworld

What happened to the other thread that was on Prince Music and More? BTW, there is a picture of them at the Dakato Club perhaps enjoying a show on the Prince Pix part 9 thread.

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Reply #3 posted 01/15/17 12:29pm

FlyOnTheWall

joytotheworld said:

What happened to the other thread that was on Prince Music and More? BTW, there is a picture of them at the Dakato Club perhaps enjoying a show on the Prince Pix part 9 thread.

[Edited 1/15/17 9:55am]

Thanks, joy. Only the moderators know what happened to the thread. All they will say is that they received a request for moderation, so it has now been "hidden for moderation" since the early hours of Tuesday morning. I have been receiving many orgNotes inquiring about it ever since.
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BTW: Thanks for the heads-up regarding that lovely Dakota Jazz Club photo of Prince and Andy. I will check it out there. It first posted it on the thread Monday night. Everything seemed to go crazy after that.

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Lastly, I posted this highly entertaining fan fiction on the Prince: Music & More, but a moderator buried it here, in spite of the fact that Prince fan fiction has always been in the PM&M forum.

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Reply #4 posted 01/15/17 5:27pm

ChanGirl

You write pretty good, Fly. You even incorporated the ring in the story, good job.

Everything you think is true
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Reply #5 posted 01/15/17 5:33pm

FlyOnTheWall

ChanGirl said:

You write pretty good, Fly. You even incorporated the ring in the story, good job.

Sounds like you like it, ChanGirl!! I wish I could take credit for it, but no. I do think the writer was following the Prince and Andy thread very closely, as were over 100,000 people. It's a pity that the thread is gone; however, I suppose some are happy.

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Reply #6 posted 01/19/17 2:18am

sharpieheartz

Hi, I'm kinda new here but I just wanted to say that I am the author of this fanfiction smile It's been in my drafts for two years now and after P's passing, I thought I'd tweak it and share it. Btw, thanks for the criticism. I always like hearing feedback because I know my writing is pretty crummy :/ but I am slowly improving with the right inspirations!

FlyOnTheWall said:

Well, now!!! Look what I just stumbled up on (not upon!!!)!!! stirthepot I've just begun to read, but, so far, it's pretty darn addictive. popcorn I hope it doesn't make too many heads explode. fuse giggle

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Time%20Prince%20%20Andy%20Allo-Fan%20Fiction-Wattpad_zpsxmasdxvs.png

[Edited 1/12/17 21:24pm]

[Edited 1/19/17 2:31am]

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Reply #7 posted 01/19/17 10:20am

FlyOnTheWall

sharpieheartz said:

Hi, I'm kinda new here but I just wanted to say that I am the author of this fanfiction smile It's been in my drafts for two years now and after P's passing, I thought I'd tweak it and share it. Btw, thanks for the criticism. I always like hearing feedback because I know my writing is pretty crummy :/ but I am slowly improving with the right inspirations!

FlyOnTheWall said:

Well, now!!! Look what I just stumbled up on (not upon!!!)!!! stirthepot I've just begun to read, but, so far, it's pretty darn addictive. popcorn I hope it doesn't make too many heads explode. fuse giggle

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Time%20Prince%20%20Andy%20Allo-Fan%20Fiction-Wattpad_zpsxmasdxvs.png

[Edited 1/12/17 21:24pm]

[Edited 1/19/17 2:31am]

Hi there!! I love your book. Welcome to the org.

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Reply #8 posted 01/19/17 11:43am

anangellooksdo
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sharpieheartz said:

Hi, I'm kinda new here but I just wanted to say that I am the author of this fanfiction smile It's been in my drafts for two years now and after P's passing, I thought I'd tweak it and share it. Btw, thanks for the criticism. I always like hearing feedback because I know my writing is pretty crummy :/ but I am slowly improving with the right inspirations!



FlyOnTheWall said:


Well, now!!! Look what I just stumbled up on (not upon!!!)!!! stirthepot I've just begun to read, but, so far, it's pretty darn addictive. popcorn I hope it doesn't make too many heads explode. fuse giggle


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I think your writing is very good for a 19-year-old. Welcome.
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Reply #9 posted 01/19/17 3:22pm

sharpieheartz

FlyOnTheWall said:

sharpieheartz said:

Hi, I'm kinda new here but I just wanted to say that I am the author of this fanfiction smile It's been in my drafts for two years now and after P's passing, I thought I'd tweak it and share it. Btw, thanks for the criticism. I always like hearing feedback because I know my writing is pretty crummy :/ but I am slowly improving with the right inspirations!

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Hi there!! I love your book. Welcome to the org.

Thank you smile means a lot!

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Reply #10 posted 01/19/17 3:23pm

sharpieheartz

anangellooksdown said:

sharpieheartz said:

Hi, I'm kinda new here but I just wanted to say that I am the author of this fanfiction smile It's been in my drafts for two years now and after P's passing, I thought I'd tweak it and share it. Btw, thanks for the criticism. I always like hearing feedback because I know my writing is pretty crummy :/ but I am slowly improving with the right inspirations!

[Edited 1/19/17 2:31am]

I think your writing is very good for a 19-year-old. Welcome.

Thanks! 💜 biggrin

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