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2elijah

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The Willow Tree



Oh sleepy willow why do you weep?
You never seem to be in peace.
Your branches bend as though in pain
as I listen to your wain.

I weep because I cannot sleep
nor will I ever be in peace
I weep for babies crying in pain,
innocent victims of humanity’s shame
caught up in man’s selfish games.

If I could move, I’d give them love,
or even give their mothers hugs
But it hurts me so, just to know,
I can do nothing to cure their woes.

Oh woe is me as I stand still
I would help the world,
if nature gave me the will

I look at you, with limbs that move
and wonder what if I were you?
Oh how I wish I could be you
for just one day, a moment or two.
I would not be still, I would get involve
I would let the world hear me cry “foul!”

Where is humankind, what has happened to love,
where is compassion or just giving hugs?
How can you sleep with the world in despair
have you no soul, no heart to share?

Oh woe is me as I stand still
I would help the world if nature
gave me the will,
but I am just a tree..…standing still.



(1 lined deleted and poem edited)
Copyright 2008 CH

(Dedicated to the women and children of Darfur
and others that suffer from the atrocities of war
around the world)
[Edited 8/22/08 18:16pm]

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Reply #1 posted 07/21/08 5:20am

FrankAxtell

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2elijah said:

Oh sleepy willow why do you weep?
You never seem to be in peace.
Your branches bend as though in pain
as I listen to your sounds of wain

I weep because I cannot sleep
nor will I ever be in peace
I weep for the babies crying in pain
innocent victims of humanity’s shame
caught up in man’s selfish games.

Oh woe is me as I stand still
I would help the world if nature
gave me the will
But I am just a tree standing still

If I could move I’d give them
love, and even give their mothers hugs
But it hurts me so, just to know
that I can do nothing, to cure their woes.
I look at you, with limbs that move
and wonder to myself, what if I were you?

Oh how I wish I could be you
for just one day, a moment or two.
I would not be still, I would get involve
I would make sure the world would hear me cry “foul!”
Where is humankind, what has happened to love,
where is compassion or just giving hugs?
How can you sleep with the world in despair
have you no soul, no heart to share?

Oh woe is me as I stand still
I would help the world if nature
gave me the will
But I am just a tree..
…standing still.




Copyright C.H. 2008
[Edited 7/20/08 14:23pm]

Well writen...good stuff.

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Reply #2 posted 07/21/08 7:57am

2elijah

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FrankAxtell said:

2elijah said:

Oh sleepy willow why do you weep?
You never seem to be in peace.
Your branches bend as though in pain
as I listen to your sounds of wain

I weep because I cannot sleep
nor will I ever be in peace
I weep for the babies crying in pain
innocent victims of humanity’s shame
caught up in man’s selfish games.

Oh woe is me as I stand still
I would help the world if nature
gave me the will
But I am just a tree standing still

If I could move I’d give them
love, and even give their mothers hugs
But it hurts me so, just to know
that I can do nothing, to cure their woes.
I look at you, with limbs that move
and wonder to myself, what if I were you?

Oh how I wish I could be you
for just one day, a moment or two.
I would not be still, I would get involve
I would make sure the world would hear me cry “foul!”
Where is humankind, what has happened to love,
where is compassion or just giving hugs?
How can you sleep with the world in despair
have you no soul, no heart to share?

Oh woe is me as I stand still
I would help the world if nature
gave me the will
But I am just a tree..
…standing still.




Copyright C.H. 2008
[Edited 7/20/08 14:23pm]

Well writen...good stuff.



Thank you kindly Frank.

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Reply #3 posted 07/22/08 9:52am

Mach

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rose

The only thing stopping you from making a change in your life is you.
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Reply #4 posted 07/22/08 5:37pm

2elijah

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Mach said:

rose


Very much appreciated!

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Reply #5 posted 07/26/08 11:35am

etifaim

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star star star star star

smile


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Reply #6 posted 08/22/08 6:00pm

2elijah

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etifaim said:

star star star star star

smile


The poem has been edited, but thank you, so much for that!
[Edited 8/22/08 18:19pm]

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